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Perfect Characters?



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Mon Apr 13, 2009 11:55 am
flytodreams says...



Perfect characters? You mean Edward Cullen? :lol:
As mentioned, flawed characters are far more believable...although I do have urges to create flawed characters now and again. xD.
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Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:12 pm
smaur says...



It's hard to advance a story with a "perfect character".

It's hard for your readers to empathize with someone who is ridiculously perfect.

It's hard for their trials and tribulations to seem real or relevant in any kind of way. They're perfect. We know they'll get what they want. We don't care.

It's hard not to write them as two-dimensional.

It's hard for them to be any fun. Or have any fun.

Your character doesn't have to be evil or awful. They might even think they're perfect. Your character doesn't have to have huge moral dilemmas or be freakishly hideous, but the development into the way they are has to be plausible. Most of the people I know who are strong as people (not physically, but emotionally) have gone through troubled childhoods. Even "perfect" families are rarely perfect. I may find someone witty and smart and awesome but I definitely will also know twelve other people who think that same person is abrasive and annoying to be around.

It may be nice to write wish fulfillment stories (see: half the fanfiction ever written) but it's often transparent to your readers (see: Eragon) and an immediate turn off.
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Tue May 12, 2009 10:39 pm
EaganDorian says...



Perfect characters is a confusing topic because you can define a perfect character as pretty much anything. You can have a perfect character for a certain role in a story. You wouldn't have a Joe Boring as your main character because most people like action (what action really is a completely different subject that you can go on about forever). So basically if you try to put the most perfect character in for that certain role so they can be considered perfect. Another kind of perfect character is the type that is the big macho handsome guy that everyone loves. I guess that he is a perfect character too. I think another definition of a perfect character is some one that is the reader's gateway into the story. It is usually someone is mistreated in some way and is used as a way to bring the reader almost perfectly into the story. It makes you care about the main character just like how most people care about themselves and it really puts you into the story. In my opinion Ender Wiggin is the most perfect character I can relate to for whatever reason. (Ender Wiggin is from Orson Scott Card's Ender's Game.)
  





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Tue Jul 07, 2009 9:55 am
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I think that there is no such thing as a perfect character due to the fact that any perfect character will be despised by the reader:
For example, I was getting through the beginning of 'Bleak House', of which I had once watched a TV adaptation. It was really good, until I got to the part where Esther Summerson narrates. She was sooo... good, it was annoying. That's why I sort of gave up reading it, because the only way I could get through one paragraph was because I knew she was going to get smallpox later on.
So, since Esther was so good, I disliked her.
This is also a reason why I preferred Jacob Black to Edward Cullen in the Twilight series by Stephanie Meyer; because Jake was actually more of a person with actual (however small) flaws, rather than a flawless rock.
So, to sum it up:
Perfect characters can be. They just are hated a bit.
Flawed characters can be. They are sympathized with. (Which is why Chekhov's The Seagull was so great; the angry Konstantin, the over-the-top Arkadina, the old Sorin, Masha with her drinking problem... Flawed the lot of them!) But not too flawed. That's my advice.
  





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Sun Jul 19, 2009 5:43 am
TNOandXadric says...



I, personally, enjoy creating perfect, god-modded characters, showing off their amazing Sue powers for three paragraphs, and then killing them in brutal, bloody ways. Then again I tend towards sadism against all of my characters, especially my protagonists. I *hate* protagonists. Well, villainous protagonists are alright, I suppose.
Anyway. Generally if I think my character's a Mary Sue I'll either kill 'em dead or torture them until they're not a Sue anymore. Or I'll just dump the story.
  





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Mon Jul 20, 2009 5:46 pm
Aina says...



My main caracters often start out as Mary Sues, but then I start to think about them and think about what thier past is like (you know: where they have lived, what thier parents are like, important events before the plot strats that might be essential to the plot and so on) and then I can't create Mary Sues because I love unhappy childhoods in all it's forms. I sometimes have orpahned caracters or caracters that are bullied or recently I created a caracter that had no friends in elementry school because she didn't want to(too complicated to explain here). Childhoods like that simply result in flawed caracters even if the flaw is only mentally. Ofcourse some of those easly result in seeming very clicé but they certainly make for good flaws.
Like alot of people here I love throwing conflict at my caracters.
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Mon Jul 20, 2009 6:05 pm
ridersofdamar says...



I dont ever have the urge to write about a perfect character, but somtimes I feel the need to have one in my story to show just how imperfect the viewpoint character is.
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