Ok, I don't know if there is a thread for this already, and if there is I'm sorry, but I need help with this. i have six chapters of my current story, Let Me Love You, up, and I have the same problem with each chapter. I tell and don't show. I do know the difference, but I just can't seem to get it incorpurated into my story.
please help.
-tiffany
Gary wrapped his strong arms around her, and rested his head on her shoulder. Isabella was so comfortable she hadn’t noticed how dark it had gotten, but Gary did. He got up and stretched his long lean body upward. Gary smiled as he went to tickle her. Isabella jumped up, and they chased each other back to the cabin.
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