My Story has my main character exploring a haunted house, I would like her to go in by herself but she needs to be speaking or she wouldn't talk with no one around. First draft had her talking into a recorder, the net one had her connected to a friend via radio. I really hate the last idea, and the Recorder is annoying me. Should I make her:
1) Tape-record, mainly because it sets up the sequel
2) Friend, but halfway through she loses contact with him and he calls the police, which kills the story.
3) Give her a voice in her head.
4) just let her talk to herself.
5) let her go silent until she meets up with someone.
Feedback please thankyou!
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