Thank you guys so much. Some of you have stated that you felt you knew where the story was going from the beginning. If you had read this without seeing the title first, would you have felt the same way? I'm considering changing the title to make it less obvious at the beginning
Probably not! But the excerpt on the back cover of your book, it would be given away. XD Focus on adding more to the dynamic of father/son and less on trying to make this controversial. The best way to make this controversial is to make this conflict meaningful through character interaction.
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