Wow. Just to start I am a prose writer and I am very serious when it comes to essence, structure, matter and composition
I am not going to dissect your work, every writer has a style and readers should not try meddle with it Beautiful read. Excellent scene and emotion conception. You write so fluently and so rightly. I am immensely impressed by the sentence composition and the way you made the story run. I can see you took a lot of pain in writing it and it shows it thoroughly. Wow.
I am just spell bound. Keep writing with the same zeal and style. Love
You know that place between sleep and awake, that place where you still remember dreaming? That’s where I’ll always love you. That’s where I’ll be waiting. — J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan
