Wow. Just to start I am a prose writer and I am very serious when it comes to essence, structure, matter and composition
I am not going to dissect your work, every writer has a style and readers should not try meddle with it Beautiful read. Excellent scene and emotion conception. You write so fluently and so rightly. I am immensely impressed by the sentence composition and the way you made the story run. I can see you took a lot of pain in writing it and it shows it thoroughly. Wow.
I am just spell bound. Keep writing with the same zeal and style. Love
