Here's the thing: I have finished my novel (FINALLY), and right now I am editting, but there's this one part that is extremely corny/cheesy...maybe not so much the writting, but the concept (OK, maybe the writting is very cheesy in places -__-) By that I mean the whole part about the storm...Can someone help me de-cornify it please? XD
THE ACTUAL STORY BEGINS IN 5, 4, 3, 2.....
Just kidding.
Upon my homecoming two years later to YWS, I'm getting rid of all the embarrassing writing I once thought was good. This is one of the main things
XD
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*author gags in mouth*
EDIT: I think you might get more help in the fiction forum, so I moved this -- Mod
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