Hourglass (pretty short)

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Duskglimmer
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Thu Mar 10, 2005 4:56 pm
Duskglimmer says... · Thu Mar 10, 2005 4:56 pm
This is a cool beginning... where does it go from there?
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Sam
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Thu Mar 10, 2005 9:46 pm
Sam says... · Thu Mar 10, 2005 9:46 pm
it's an add-on to an existing story... :wink:
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bluecows
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Thu Mar 10, 2005 10:12 pm
bluecows says... · Thu Mar 10, 2005 10:12 pm
I like it, but i wanna know more about luke (is that his name?) and Liberty
you said it was an ad on to an other story, can i see the story?

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Sam
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Thu Mar 10, 2005 11:03 pm
Sam says... · Thu Mar 10, 2005 11:03 pm
sure. just scroll back a couple posts...:D
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Elizabeth
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Fri Mar 11, 2005 1:18 am
Elizabeth says... · Fri Mar 11, 2005 1:18 am
Hehe, nice... somebody got killed! I love it when people get killed because... it just adds a sudden.... death to intrest... nothing more to say... I'm the lazy lady.
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hekategirl
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Fri Mar 11, 2005 10:28 pm
hekategirl says... · Fri Mar 11, 2005 10:28 pm
I love this!!! and I agree with TBR, when you pulled in death it gave it a cool twist.

P.S bluecows and Duskglimmer you can just look in her profolio too, for the past stories....
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Emma
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Sat Mar 12, 2005 10:42 pm
Emma says... · Sat Mar 12, 2005 10:42 pm
Its good so far, man you have a better use of words than me! And your younger! I really need to start learning in English....
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nickelpickle
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Mon Jun 06, 2005 3:14 am
nickelpickle says... · Mon Jun 06, 2005 3:14 am
omg...you're gonna keep me up all night reading this story sam....i agree, death is a neccessity in this story...continue the good work
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