I think it was great. Your description is very good, and the story is interesting. I think i spotted a few typos, but it could just be me.
{rubs eyes to get rid of the sleep clouding them}
My life is a broken stair
Winding down a ruined tower
and leading no where
You'd be astonished at the intimate stories, hidden struggles, and heartfelt dreams that people are willing to reveal if only they find someone who'll truly listen. — Arcticus
That's why.
