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I couldn't wait. I've posted again.
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@TheFantasy14 want me to keep going with the chapter? You could PM me what's in the file or if its easier you can just do it. Whatever works best.
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Alright, I'll do that @Lau2001




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@Chaser could we possibly meet to plan out the combat scene with Kir and Astral? Reading your recent post, I'm thinking I might need to change a few things so I wanted to check and see if what I have planned will still go along with what your planning on doing with Astral's character if that makes sense.




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It honestly still could happen. After me and Chaser do the time skip you could find the bunker and start a fight with him. He is somewhat trying to explain, but you don't listen. Then Scar could come in and tell her to stop.

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I have one more post I need to do before our time skip @Chaser Let me know if you have anymore
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I'm good. I'm just glad you're alright with my post.
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okay. alright then, good. I wanted a chance for Kir to use some big magic, kind of use this fight to have readers see her in a new light, but I can do that when they confront Blak later on.




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I loved it! Why did you think I wouldn't? @Chaser
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I've posted! Kirsten wears a glove on her left hand after this. (Pretty epic fight scene in this one!)




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What way are we heading with the plot now? And are we close too rescuing Scar?
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Hey I have an idea Fanty before we do the time skip to saving Scar. I will pm you soon!! @TheFantasy14
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That sounds like a good idea,@HazelGrace16. Let's do that!




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Time jump is here!
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Posted. (Sorry, too excited to wait! :D)



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