I'll post next. Another flashback explaining the whole money buisness and bonding with Leon. Not much plot action, but I'll tell you when it's up. Also, do you think when we rescue Scar there could be a fight scene with Astral and Kirsten? I need some practice writing a realistic compat scenario and I also want the stronger aspects of Kir's character to show a little and for her to do some majorly awesome magic, because this far Kirsten has been shown as a little helpless.
@Chaser, I like how Astral's first real freind of the story is a machine... Kir's gonna make a bunch of jokes about that later on.
That sounds cool @TheFantasy14 !! Just remember that there are still some things I need to accomplish before Scarlette gets saved. She needs to finish the stages and then afterwards get brainwashed. It will take awhile. So if anyone can think of something I suggest a tiny problem that overpowers Scarlettes rescue for awhile. Honestly Astral could create a video showing Scarlettes "death" therefore that leads some to believe she is dead, and then some to believe she is still alive. I just need more time.
"Sometimes it is the people who no one imagines anything of who do the things that no one can imagine" - The Imitation Game
Halfbloodchetaah and I were talking about maybe meeting Carlos dad who is also Ty's creator. Would that be something to occupy time? It would be a scene where Carlos thinks his dad isn't to blame and that he's innocent and Type wanting to rip the mans throat our....and Carlos protects his dad....that sorta thing. Seem interesting?
"Keep calm, drink tea and hide under the bedcovers"
Post is up. Warning intense stuff! Please be aware I made the choices so the after affects of the mental torture will make sense. Please don't hate it.
"Sometimes it is the people who no one imagines anything of who do the things that no one can imagine" - The Imitation Game
@Lau2001 it sounds good. might I add something? maybe he could take us (Under false pretenses) to train at a top secret facility. he can't kill them because they're still under Matt's protection, but there could be some guys in the group who don't trust Dr. Hernandez, and some who thinks he's actually trying to help. the facilitymight also later on become the team headquarters (They could take it over from the scientists.) that would give everyone time to do everything that needs to be done.
