Gah, I'm really sorry >.< Thank you for understanding my busy life, but I do really need to get on this. I will try my absolute hardest to get caught up and make a decent post by tomorrow evening (for me ). This shall not die!
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge