Hi! Not to be a review hog, but I have an "Of Mice and Men" essay I'd love for you to review! Please, if you have a spare thought, consider reviewing it? Here's the link: viewtopic.php?t=74133 Thanks!
“Maybe it’s fate that Hound ate the map. Maybe we’ll discover soemthing wonderful while we’re lost.”-The Penderwicks
I'd love your opinion on THIS piece. If it helps you ahead of time, I couldn't care less about grammatical, punctuation, and spelling errors. I will find them on my next read through. I need more general comments on character, plot, etc. Also specific wording of sentences and metaphor.
Thanks ahead of time. --D
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Hey draax, I'm working on a novel with bluewaterlily and we have 3 chapters. Could you review a little? It doesn't have to be all of them, maybe one or two. But if you wouldn't mind, I would love a review for chapter 3. This is the link to the portfolio, and Ogygia is the only thing in there. If there is anything you want me to review in return, just tell me. Happy Review day!
Cats are like characters. You may say they're yours, but in reality, they own you. ~Me
You can take away all the arts you want, but soon, the children won't have anything to read or write about. ~Glen Holland
Daddy Long Legs are more closely related to crabs than spiders and somehow the idea of crablike creatures with spider legs that have escaped the entrappings of the primordial sea and now crawl over land and can walk up and down walls and ceilings creeps me more than I can adequately describe. — Snoink
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