Would you mind reviewing a short story for me? I wrote it for a contest and I don't like it much, so I need some advice to help me improve it. It's not long at all really.
Yay! I haven't watched all the seasons, so I won't be able to tell you if it fit's cannon or not. But I can let you know how the characterization. I will review this as soon as I get my Phil paper done.
Hey there, would you mind giving a review on this?..it's kind of urgent, so it'd be great if you could review it soon, but no pressure, you could turn it down, of course.
~Shubhi
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