Young Writers Society

Hi everyone! I've been meaning to get back into reviewing lately, so I'd figured I'd open up one of these threads. I'll review almost all types of prose. However, art and photography is a total weakness for me...Ask for one of those and you'll get something like "Whoa, that looks cool!" So, I prefer to do :
~Poetry
~Short stories ('specially horror XD)
~Fanfiction (If I've read the book...)
I stay away from
~Art and photography
~Chapter stories...I might do them if they aren't too long though...So, you can try!
~Anything that's more than 3-4 pages long...If it is, please post it in parts!
~Anything to do with Twilight...Unless it is one of those hysterical parodies
Anywayz, I would like you to specify what kind of review you would like. I can do a nitpick-y one, a general view, or specific concepts that should be worked on...
As for rewards, British chocolate in the mail would be appreciated...If not, telling me whether the review was helpful or not would do as well!
I think that's about it for now! Just send me the link and the genre and I'll be sure to review it as soon as possible!
fluteluvr77<3

Aww, no requests? Come on guys you know you want a review!

We-eeell, I really don't like asking for reviews, but you need to have a request, darling!

Here's the first tidbit in my novel- I don't think it's all that long. topic46313.html

Thanks!

Love,
Music

Yay!! Thanks Music! Your story was awesome by the way!

Any more?

Hey =]

I'm here!

Can you review this for me, please? It's the first chapter though you might want to read the prologue first.

topic45904.html - First chapter.

As for what type of review...can you do an overview please? Though if you find mistakes you're welcome to point them out

Thank you!

xDudettex

topic43698.html

Do you mind?
It's the first part out of four. They aren't that long. It's historical romantic fiction.
Please and Thank you

Done you guys! Great job!
...Any more?

My apologise for not saying what type of review i wanted. Hmm, anything that seems silly, any mistakes or anything that you find that just doesnt work, could you point those out. Or if anything doesnt sound right, or confusing. stuff like that. Other than that, what you did before helps.

Alrighty, here we go.

Parts two-five. Six is up, but not completed. I'll let you know when that happens.

topic43700.html

topic46177.html

topic46177.html

topic46403.html

Do with that what you will. Haha. thanks again for all of your help.

Hi Flutie! Here's a prologue to a fantasy story I'm just beginning. It's called the Piper. Can you pretty please review it? Okay... Here it is~

topic44955.html

Thank you so much!

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody

Kai done!
Jaz...I'll work on it tomorrow, promise!

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It's historical fiction, and if you could focus on whether it works as a first chapter, character impressions and general whatevers. Thanks!

Here it is, Twin:

topic46276.html


Review any time you'd like.
And wow, it looks like you're getting a lot of business here, Twin. I'm jealous! My "Will Review For Food" thread died weeks ago! Ah well.

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*shoves cookies at Flute* Take as long as you need, darling. I'll be patient.

Jaz - The links are messed up...What parts exactly should I review?
Woo - Done!
E_P - Soon, twin...
Music - Soon!

I believe four, five, and six are the only ones you haven't gotten to yet.

Part four
topic46182.html

Part Five
topic46403.html

And, Part six
topic46404.html

Within the next week, i should be posting the next chapter up. It isn't 100%, if you would want to take a look at it. Thanks again for all of your help. Sorry for the mix up with the links. I don't know what happened.