Young Writers Society

My other thread died, and I'm too lazy to dig it out.

So, what do I review?
Almost anything really. I'm not likely to do fanfic, or horror. I'm not all that interested in science fiction; but if you ask nicely I might do it. I'm more likely to if it's not one section of a longer story.
My specialty is poetry. Where that is concerned, I will review absolutely anything; you're far more likely to get a review from me if it's a poem

Oh, one more thing. Please only post one thing at a time.
Let's give me some steady business, eh?

Completed:
A Collection of Poetry, I - Lost_in_dreamland
These Eyes of Mine - wisemann210
Dreams of Giants, pt.1 - yrclever
I'll always be weak - alwaysawriter
Let me go - Rosey Unicorn
Threnody - Forever Threnody
Fearless Battle with Imprudence - peanutgallery007
Dreams of Giants, pt.2 - yrclever

A tiny poem.

topic45162.html

Thanks

www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic45077.html


Thanks, it's a poem.

Done! Who's next?

I can't let this thread die again! I need reviews!!!

Okay,

Well, if you do want to do another review, I suppose I can let you do mine .

I mean please do this: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic45220.html
*gets down onto his knees and grovels*

Thanks so much!

Done!

Is this okay? It's Non-Fiction but it's short (only 505 words).

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic45235.html

Thanks!

-always

Done. Next?

Please go and shred this for me:

topic45480.html

Thank you!

Done!

Hi Adnamarine!

Could you please review this little poetry piece for me? Be as harsh as you find necessary.

Here it is:
Threnody

Thank you so much!

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody

Hi Adnamarine,

After such a great critique on the first part of the first chapter of Dreams of Giants, I'd be most grateful for a review on the second part: it can be found here: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic45712.html

Thanks so much!

I would love it if you would review this for me;
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic45781.html

It is a poem that I entered in a contest. Thank you so much!

Would you review my prologue, Disaster, in the Fantasy Section please?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post533225.html#533225