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Sat Mar 07, 2009 5:19 am
MidnightVampire says...



Welcome to MidnightVampire's Mystical/Awesome Review shop!

I want to review more, and possibly get another star sometime soon...so give me what you want to review..

What I Can Review
Dramatic Poetry
Other Poetry
Romantic Fiction
Action/Adventure
Fantasy Fiction
Other Fiction

What I love to review
Narrative Poetry
Lyric Poetry
Photography and such (not promising the best reviews, but I do enjoy it)

I especially love these (^) but I do like reviewing all of them, so I will.

What I can't review (Sorry guys, I do have my limits)
Horror
Scripts

Here's my reasons to why I don't necessarily like critiquing these: I usually stay up late, so if your horror is really good, then I'll be freaked. And if it's not, I'll still freak out. and for scripts,I don't think I could give them the review they deserve.

I may make a couple exceptions, though. So post the title, genre and give me a link. Also, if its in the middle of the story, please fill me in. I'll try to give honest reviews...if you want me to go easy or hard on you or search for anything specific please tell me. I'm not good at spelling or grammer, though.

What I Have Done:
Stuck In the Past by saphire_earthgaurdian
Mimimac's random story part.
The Kingdom is Departed by TL G=Wooster
Hellfire (part 1) by RayneChild
Listless by Sinnful
The Mansion (chapter eight part one) by Lord Anzius
The Accidental Rebellion by Hippie
Robin Hood:Sell out by Emilygale
Tree of Deciet by TeenQueen


What I Have Yet to Do:
The Mansion: Chapter 8 part 2, Chapter 1 part 1 by Lord Anzius
Phantasm: Prolouge,Chapter 1 part 1, Chapter 1 part 2 by nevermore

So...let the reviewing begin!
Last edited by MidnightVampire on Sun May 17, 2009 5:36 pm, edited 14 times in total.
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Sat Mar 07, 2009 4:19 pm
Mira says...



Um... I was wondering if you could review my story Stuck in the Past. It's fantasy fiction, but I didn't see the genre on your list. Still, I thought I'd give it a shot. :)

Here's the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic44529.html

I hope you like it and be as harsh as you can be! Thanks a bunch!

@;- Saph
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Sun Mar 08, 2009 6:27 am
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It seems I neglected to put it on one of the lists. But I do review fantasy, so I'll edit that.

Saphire_earthgaurdian: Done! I hope your happy with your review. Took me a while. Pm me with any questions by the way.
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Mon Mar 09, 2009 7:04 pm
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:cry: Sure none of you want a review?
Please? You know you want one!
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Mon Mar 09, 2009 8:42 pm
mimimac says...



review this please:
topic44648.html
Thanks :)
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Wed Mar 11, 2009 1:46 am
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Mimimack:I have finished!
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Thu Mar 12, 2009 12:11 am
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Please you guys? I do review things! I like to review things! Please?
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Thu Mar 12, 2009 6:00 pm
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Title: The Kingdom is Departed (chapter one)
Genre: Fantasy/alternate history
Link: topic45024.html

Thanks! :D
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Sat Mar 14, 2009 3:35 pm
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TL G-Wooster - I should have your critique by the end of the day.
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Sat Mar 14, 2009 11:46 pm
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TL G-Wooster-Done!
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Thu Mar 26, 2009 2:12 am
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Hey! I was wondering if you could review my Hellfire story:

topic36884.html

I want it to be my first book, so I need as many reviews as possible. Thanks so much :D

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Well, I think guns help. If you just stand there and yell BANG I don't think you're going to kill too many people...





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Fri Mar 27, 2009 6:37 am
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RayneChild: Sweet! I'll get on it ( I feel bad for not doing it now, but its about midnight...so I wish to sleep.)
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Sat Mar 28, 2009 6:19 pm
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Rayne- Done!

Anyone want a review? I'm bored. I have time on my hands...feed me literature please!
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Sat Mar 28, 2009 6:24 pm
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Could you maybe do a review of my Romantic Fiction story, Honey Euphoria? It's R rated though - so if not, then maybe my Other Fiction story, Listless? Your choice, really. c:





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Sat Mar 28, 2009 8:18 pm
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic45764.html

the Mansion ch 8 part 1
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