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I tend to have issues choosing something to review... So I'm going to let you do that for me!

I will review any fiction, though I specialize in fantasy.

Just give me the title, genre, a brief summary and, of course, the link. Something along the line of my example would be great:
Title: The Mind
Genre: Fantasy
Summary: A young Faerie discovers that she has the Power needed to rescue the new ruler of their world. The only problem is, she doesn't know who it is.
Link: topic42472.html

Oh, and if you have a preference for how critical I am or on what aspect of your fiction you wish for me to concentrate on, please specify in your request as well.

-Lydia

Title: Sheep
Genre: Other
Summary: Uh...me conversing with my inner self.
Link: topic42614.html

Thanks LydiaB! Um...could you concentrate on the style and voice? This is highly experimental and I'd like to see how it goes. And be as critical as you want.

I did the review, though I didn't feel there was much for me to do.
It looked to be well-written and thought out and the style and voice was fine, in my opinion.

I hope that you keep writing and experimenting with new styles.
-Lydia

Anyone else?

Anyone else have something they want me to review for them?

Anyone else need a review?

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