Young Writers Society

:smt006Trying to boost my reviews, So I will review ANYTHING, to the BEST of my ability (which is pretty good!)

Please post a link to your story/whatever, and tell me how harsh a critique you are looking for, and I'll do my best!!

I ask for nothing in return... only that you come back!
And come back again... and again... until you are slave to my powerful critiques!

Please don't feel dtered if there is already a critique waiting, I'm posting daily, so it doesn't matter. The more, the better in my opinion!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33544.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36932.html

I would like these to be reviewed if you don't mind. Be as harsh as you want to! (:

Done and Done! Hope these were of some use to you!

Thanks! -Gives big warm cookie-

COME ON!!! I need reviews, I am getting bored here...

Hi asxz

Could you do me a favor and review this story: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic42774.html

I'd like you to critique it firstly on its readability, secondly on it's believability, and finally on it's dialogue. While all of the above points are fairly important, I really think the latter two need a lot of work. So please, be my guest and do your worst. Thanks a lot!

Have a good one!

Done and done, hope you like it... anyone else???

Thanks so much asxz . Great review! How many points would you like?

This one please?
topic42563.html
It's a fantasy romance, though the fantasy part hasn't really started yet.
EXPECT TO BE CONFUSED! It's supposed to be that way at the beginning in that story

yrclever, I am not really looking for point, because I got the 50 from your review, but if you want to, then feel free!

Vivacious, I have done your review, and it is posted on your story!

Thanks much appreciated!

I'd appreciate it if you review my new song, Shine.

topic43324.html

Hey, thunder_dude7, the review is posted... I don't really like doing lyrics, but that was my best! Thanks for using my free service!

A review of my short story The Last Good Man would be absolutely awesome. Please and thank you very much.

Hey EmmVeePi, good story! You'll be happy to find your review posted under the story! Keep the reviews coming!

How about topic43618.html

here is a little bit about it!

A childish girl who lives in a childish illusion that the world is loving and death doesn't exist. However, when she moves in with her stepmother everything will change. Simply meaning that a man comes along and bursts her bubble. Come and read the horrifying and disturbing horror/comedy about a girl and her neighbor, a homicidal mass murdering maniac!