Young Writers Society

My aim is to have 150 critiques before New Years. So, until New Years, I am doing everything.

I'm good at any of the Fictions like Romance, Fantasy, Action etc. I'm willing to do poems, scripts, lyrics, photos, fan fic, anything.


Good with: Grammar, characterisation, setting, plot development, feeling/emotions, spelling. I'm brutal but i'm honest and usually very thorough. I do any kind you want - inline, brief overall thought, or complete and utter rip-apart.

could you review this for me?

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In progress!

topic32635.html - this is chapter one. could you please review it for me?

topic40437.html - this is the re-write version of the Prolouge of my story. can you please review this as well?

You really haven't included photography in you list but well, what do you think of these few photos

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic40658.html

All completed
Hope you found them good

How about this?
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How about this?
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How about this?
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I have a...pretty long ghost story...here it is: topic36235.html *it is long..* but I will beg humbly: please, please at least look at it. I think it's a pretty good one...my attempt at an action/fantasy thriller.

All in progress guys! Just having a bad week, so critiques will be allllll completed by Wednesday

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