Young Writers Society

Feel like reviving a starving reviewer? You're in the right place!

I finally got some spare time and I realized I didn't know what to do with it.
Suddenly a bulbosaur appeared and told me I must review! for food!
It's true!
Okay, minus the bulbosaur part.
Oh hush.


So what do I review?
A better question would be what don't I review.
I don't do lyrics; I would really be of no help to you there. I don't like to do science fiction, or fanfic, but maybe if you're really desperate I'll give it a shot, though you'd get a much better review of it from somebody who enjoys those genres. :)

My critiques
Pretty basic, grammar, character, setting, style--for stories anyway. Poetry is another story completely.
If you want me to go very in depth, make mention of it and allow a little extra time. I'll try to be as prompt with these as possible.
If there are specific things you'd like to be looked at, post it here with your link,

Payment?
Chocolate, roses, love letters, the usual.

In Progress:


Completed:
Prologue - Maki-Chan
Heart's Illusion (chap. 1) - Maki-Chan
Creatures of Shadow - vox-nihili
In this heart of ours - vixeyt
Look - LoveableLittleSock
The Running Away Song - Clo
Brick by Brick - OverEasy
Broken, Prologue - CastlesInTheSky
Morning Memoirs, or The Unhappy Epilogue - Clo
Beta - Sheik
This Shouldn't Be prologue - Lord Anzius
Have an ice day - Demeter
A simple mistake - OverEasy
The Ripper prologue - Lord Anzius
Simple Mistake, chap. 2 - OE
The Scribe - Dr.Atl

prologue and chapter 1 need reviews ^_^


topic35779.html - prologue

topic35820.html -chapter 1

I have a prologue sort of piece for a fantasy story. It has ghosts, human sacrifice, and lost souls. Not written to be creepy though. here's the link.
post447904.html#447904

My vampire story. I'll try mail you the perfect kitten.

topic37211.html

Hey. Could you please review this for me? It'd be greatly appreciated. Just remember to read the link first, okay? =]

topic38505.html

Thanks a bunch!

topic38723.html it's nothing speacial but its the end of a day, then i will go to the begining after.

topic38822.html

Pwetty pwease?

topic38895.html

I would love a review from the wonderful Adna!

Please?

OverEasy

Hello;
I will be in complete adoration of you forever and beyond if you review this: topic35040.html

Any chapter(s) you want, doesn't necessarily have to be the first one.

Thankyou so much, you lovely person.
xxx

topic39139.html

You are so awesome!

Any one of my Vicissitudes stories (in my portfolio) would be fine.

Please review these:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36987.html This shouldn't be prologue

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34323.html The mansion chapter 1

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35415.html The mansion chapter 2

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34985.html The ripper prologue

Lord Anzius (and this applies to everyone please), in the future please only post one thing at a time.

Hi, Adna!

Hopefully you have time to review one of my poems:

topic39090.html

Thanks very much! And don't stress about it if you're too busy.

Demeter xxx

Err... I was hoping that because I love you, I might be able to possibly post two chapters?

They are both pathetically short... if that helps ^.^


topic39608.html

topic39694.html


If you can only get to one of them, I will still totally adore you.


OverEasy