Young Writers Society

Preferences
. Romantic fiction and any kind of fiction really is my speciality
. If you have a story that you haven't yet posted on YWS, and want someone to review it beforehand - ask me and I'll help out!! Just let me know on here first so I can keep track of everything =P
. I will have a go at scripts, fanfiction, and art critiques, but I warn you beforehand that they may not be too good, but I'm willing to try (:
. Please, no sci-fi, fantasy, non-fiction or poetry requests

My Reviewing Techniques
Firstly, I will go through the work and point out any grammar, wording, etc. mistakes I could spot. Then I will go through my thoughts of the story in more detail at the bottom, so you will get a feel of what your audience is thinking throughout reading it, and I will also point out where I think you could improve.
Here are a couple of my recent reviews:
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Advanced Warning
My critiques tend to be nit-picky and harsh, but please don't be offended, as I try to help as much as I can!

Price
There are no strings attached, I just love having the chance of helping people out if I can - I'm strange like that haha
But if you want to check my work out, you're more than welcome

My completed requests:
Teddybear22: The Triangle Effect (Chapters 1, 2 & 3)
Shannon: Second From the Left
Fun4eva: The Meeting at the Cafe
Bickazer: Vicissitudes (1. Alice; 3. Tyler; 4. Laurence)
Fun4eva: How I survived High School
Kissthewitch: Everything Sparkles
CastleInTheSky: Broken - 7
Rascalover
Night Mistress: Poison Love (Prologue; Chapter One; Chapter Two)
Maki Chan: Silent Hill; Shepherd's Lamb (Prologue)
Stori: Take My Voice
200397(Sunny): Ophelia's Death
RGallagher: The Elves Are Coming
KaliaMarie: Hey Babycakes
1stViolinS.C.: No name, sorry
silverSUNLIGHTx: Message Three Prelude (Part One & Two)
Moriah Leliah: For The Girls (Chapter One)
EmmVeePi: The Last Good Man
Forever Threnody: Piper's Legend
Dudette: Lily Foxglove (1)

My current requests:
My Sunshine: You Kept Me Alive (over email)
Teddybear22: The Triangle Effect (Chapter 4)

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Thank you!

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nothing urgent, just would like some feedback.

graciass!

shannon

Hey luccy!!!
After a long time huh??
Nice to see you started a forum here..

Well...I need a review for a short story I wrote for Pattycake's contest...
The deadline for this contest is 30th october...
So please try to review this before that..

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Thanks a lot in adavance!!

xxx
Fun4eva!!

Roll up, roll up, free reviews on offer!!
I'm waiting ...

Come on, guys!! Free reviews!! I have nothing better to do. I'm desperate for requests!!

If you would look at either one of my current Vicissitudes stories (don't worry about chrnological order; you can read either one without needing to read the other), I would greatly appreciate it.

They do contain LGBT themes, so if that's not your thing I understand; you don't have to do it if you don't want to. ^^

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Thanks very much in advance.

Done.
Next!!

I feel horrible for asking this so soon after you did the first one already, but...

Er, if you could take a look at the third Vicissitudes story...I'd love you forever.

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hey lucyy!
If you aren't busy these days..I'd love for you to review my story I've been working on....
I haven't had much reviews so I'd love to have one from you...

Chapter 5:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37693.html
Chapter 6:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37854.html

You could check out the previous ones to understand the story but I think it'll be easy to catch up.

And another request, can I keep asking you for reviews when I post more chapters of the same story??

I will get to both of your requests as soon as I can, but I apologise in advance for the delay. I've just got back to school after half term, and I'm already ploughed down with homework and revision. But I promise your reviews will be the first things on my list as soon as I get free time!!
Again, sorry about the delay,

--Lucyy xx

No problem! No rush on the reviews...you cant take you own time sweety!

I am now open to more requests!!
Keep them coming!!

--Lucyy xx

Will you review something i haven't posted on the site yet if I pm it to you??

Vicissitudes 3 and 4? *puppy dog eyes*

Tres: topic38058.html

y cuatro: topic38150.html

Many thanks in advance.