Young Writers Society

Okay, my school's fall break is officially over, , but I'm still reviewing. Of course during the week I'm uber busy, but I promise I'll get to any requests as fast as possible, and still keep up with the in-depth reviews.

WHAT I WILL CRITIQUE:

*Advanced Critiques
*Any fiction
*Any rating. I've written 'R' pieces so I can't exactly refuse to critique them
*Multiple chapters
*More than one request by the same author (If you have more than one piece that needs a review, leave all the links here.)

I'm willing to critique non-fiction, but if I have a lot of fiction critiques the non-fiction stories will probably get bumped down.


WHAT I WON'T CRITIQUE:

*Art
*Lyrics
*Poetry
*Fan-Fiction
*Pieces that haven't been proofread at least once. I refuse to read through something that has a huge amount of glaring typos. It bothers me to no end.

It's not that I'm unwilling to review art, lyrics, or poetry, it's just that I would be so utterly un-useful that you would chase me out of the forum screaming bloody murder.


WHAT I WANT IN RETURN:

*Points (I'm saving up to post an advanced critique story)
*A review of my novel in progress The Love Note
*A message on my profile
*And just because they said I couldn't ask for it, a kitten to sacrifice to the SPEW gods.

Other Things to Remember:
*Don't ask for a fanfic critique, because you won't get it.
*I'm willing to review scripts, but don't shoot me if I sound like a clueless idiot
*I'll critique historical fiction, but chances are I won't be able to point out historical errors, only writing ones.
*Payment is not required
*I will do my best to rip your story to shreds, so don't get offended when I do.

Why you Should Choose me:
*I'm a very harsh critiquer. You will get an honest yet helpful review every time.
*I have way too much free time, so the review is guaranteed to be as in-depth as possible.
*I belong to multiple writing sites and have a lot of experience in critiquing, even if I don't have that many reviews here on YWS
*I get straight A's in English, so you can bet I'll catch any grammar mistake you throw at me.
*Payment isn't required (Everyone loves free stuff, right)

So post away and give me something to do before I die of boredom.


To be Critiqed
1.
2.
3. fun4eva ch. 6
4. Lord Anzius 1
5. Lord Anzius 2
6. Lord Anzius 3
7. Wisemann

Done
1. Cormac and Eddie
2. Born Again
3. Is Hope Enough
4. Potential prologue
5. Jon
6. House Warming
7. Chapter 1: Alice
8. Mother
9. How I Survived High School ch. 1
10. How I Survived High School ch. 2

As you can see, once I get or complete your request, you'll be added to one of the lists above, so make sure you come back and check where you are. Also, feel free to hound me with your request if I don't get to it fast enough.

Come on, people! Someone has to want a review!

OK. But these stories are not that good:

Cormac and Eddy Discuss Women and Break-Ups.
Born Again.

Well...I have two things I'd like to have looked at, but they both occupy different priorities...one is less immediate/urgent and the other is for a contest with an 8/15 deadline. However, it's nonfiction, so you might award the fiction story higher precedence. Soo...it doesn't matter either way, honestly.

Here's the fiction one, a potential prologue for an epic science fiction novel:
topic37039.html

The nonfiction one:
topic36238.html

Many thanks in advance.

Finally!

Okay, you're all done.

Next!

I said "NEXT!!!!"

Please!

topic37181.html

topic37256.html


You are my hero and i believe a donation is in order.

Okay, you're both done.

Who's next?

Ahem. NEXT?!

Come on, someone has to want a review.

chapter 4: topic36734.html
chapter 5: topic37693.html
chapter 6: topic37854.html

Thanks a lot in advance! These are just chapter 4, 5 & 6. I don't think the previous chapters would be neccesary, you'll be able to catch up on the story. Of course, if you wish to you could always check it out.

And by the way, which chapter am I supposed to review??
Can you leave me a PM with the link??
Thanks a lot and I would really apreaciate it!!

Um, if you don't mind homo/bisexuality, would you check out my story Vicissitudes? I'm very nervous about it because it's the very first romance I've ever written.

topic37792.html

I'm cool if you don't want to do it, though.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37843.html

Could you tear this apart please?

sure, I'll take a look at it.....but might take a bit of time, though....

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34323.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35415.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35811.html

please review. need more reviews