Young Writers Society

Hey everyone!

If you are in dire need of a review or just want me to give a little comment then leave me a message here and I'll be more than happy to do it for you!

I'm online most of the day and I promise my review will be done within 24 hours! But to be quite honest if you're online in UK time betweent 12pm n 12am it'll probably be done within the hour! Thats a promise not many people can make...what can I say..I have no life!

Hey,

Can you critique my new piece Gossip and Lies?

Thanks,
choco.

PS- Let me know if there's anything I can crit for you.

I'm on it! If you could hve a look at my mentally ill stuff in my featured works it'd be really helpful...cheers me dears...

heyy(:

yea, i'd love it, anything in the portfolio, whatever chatches your eye

thanks
<3pmilo

After your brilliant (and quick) review of Gossip and Lies, I was wondering if you could critique Memo's of Bleeding Hearts? (It's in my portfolio, first under Other)

Thanks, and be sure to tell me if you want any more critiques, I've got nothing else to do right now.

Tis done my dear, but I had already reviewed it before! This is more detailed though, so i hope it helps you out! I must have been in a rush before!

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- please? It's short. Impressions would be very, very welcome.

come on! give me some more reviews people!

Very happy to be oblige.

Can you please take a look at my story "Victim Number Eight"? I'd say it's a romance but...it's rather dark.

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Are you willing to do advanced critiques? Mine is rather long...

I'm sure I can stretch to an advanced critique...

xxx

If you're not too busy.


1: topic36822.html

2: topic37326.html

3: topic37980.html

Please review this poem: topic38050.html

Thanks!

Hi,
I'm entering an excerpt from my novel into a contest for a boarding school. I need someone to review it for me and you did an excellent job on simple's "No name, yet again ):" that I thought I would ask for your help.

I might be a bit stubborn but the beginning I do not want to change. I have contacted people from the school and they said that profanity is fine. It will sound disgusting and someone people on YWS said it was something that could be in a play boy novel, but I like it. It makes people interested, no matter how dirty

You can find the first two chapters of the novel here: topic37133.html

And the third here: topic36631.html

I also want you to take a look at my poem: topic38161.html

I am also entering this in the same contest.

I thank you greatly!

Love,
N

Hey. Could you please review this for me? It'd be greatly appreciated. Just remember to read the link first, okay? =]

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Thanks a bunch!