Young Writers Society

Get your poetry critiques here! The next couple of weeks are a great time to ask because I'm off uni for easter. But of course, after that I will certainly still make time to answer every request I receive. So post your poetry links here and I'll give you my finest crits.

I also offer spelling and grammar checks for all works, so if spelling or sentence structure is your weakness, PM me your word document and I'll edit it and get it back to you ASAP.

Also, if I'm particularly helpful, feel free to mention my review in the reviewer testimonials thread.

Hiya, Matt!

Could you take a look at this for me?

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I can raid your portfolio in return if you want.

Thanks!

Dreamer

Does poetry also mean lyrics? I'm looking for some critiques on a song I wrote. If you can't do lyrics, that's fine, but I'd really like it if you could take a look.

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Thanks heaps.

I critiqued both of your works.

More requests please!

Here's a few more

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Please and Thank You!

Hey there, Matt

I'm participating in the NaPoWriMo and I was wondering if you could take a look at my NaPo thread (topic28173.html). You don't have to give very in depth or specific critques, but a few broad general impressions for improvement would be greatly appreciated.

-Kylan

Done!

Hello! Back with another

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Please and Thank you!

OverEasy

Done!

Anymore for any more?

Oh! Me! Me! Let's see if I can get the link-thingie right...

I Am Legend

**OH YEAH!!! POWER TO ME!!!!**

Note: this has absolutely nothing to do with the movie.

Crit appreciated! Anything I put up on here generally gets ignored, so...

I'd love one on this if you get a chance;

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If you don't, don't worry. I'm happy to critique poetry in return so feel free to pm me or post in my thread here.

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everyone seems to be avoiding it, so If you want you can look at it! Thanks.

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Just posted this. I'm not that great at poetry and need all the help I can get. XD

-Jared

Hello


If you please

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Thanks!

OverEasy

hii there.
I would really like some more critiques on the poems I wrote....especially the second one.
Please have a look and tell me how it is. Here are the links.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34563.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34610.html

thanks a lot in advance...I would really appreciate the help
xxx