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Fri Apr 17, 2009 2:56 am
zoorah12 says...



Hey! Thanks in advance. This is an essay I wrote expressing my idealism towards the modern world and society.


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I read somewhere... how important it is in life not necessarily to be strong... but to feel strong.





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Tue Apr 28, 2009 5:00 am
asxz says...



Waiting for some more!
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Wed Apr 29, 2009 7:09 pm
*writewatiwant* says...



Hi asxz! I'm Kat, and I would love if you'd review my NaPo's Thread: The Diary of Poetry
I was aiming for an overview look of the poems.

Thanks!
*Kat*
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Wed May 06, 2009 7:05 pm
asxz says...



keep em coming!
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Thu May 07, 2009 10:10 pm
Rascalover says...



I have recently posted a new romantic fiction piece and all the reviews I have been getting are good, and thats it just good. I need some one to give me some constructive critism
so will you please review this for me ?

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Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html





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Thu May 14, 2009 4:11 am
asxz says...



Rascalover wrote:I have recently posted a new romantic fiction piece and all the reviews I have been getting are good, and thats it just good. I need some one to give me some constructive critism
so will you please review this for me ?

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So sorry, stopped checking this thread a few days ago... forgot, I guess. Well, I'm onto your review now!
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Thu May 14, 2009 3:44 pm
lilymoore says...



Hey, if your up and running, then I could really use a review on my Story "A Touch of Death." It has three parts but its all very short.

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.





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Sun May 17, 2009 4:21 am
Ermixon says...



Could you please review my science fiction story.

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give me the harshest critique that you can muster.





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Sun May 17, 2009 5:50 am
asxz says...



Okay guys... I'm on it. I was away at a hockey tournament this weekend, but I should be done by tomorrow evening, if not tonight!

Oh yeah... we came first... whoo hoo!
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Mon May 18, 2009 7:28 pm
JFW1415 says...



into the cracks of the earth

A Jigsaw Heart

Both poems, so it shouldn't take too long.

Thanks so much!

~JFW1415





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Wed May 27, 2009 7:54 pm
Sins says...



Hey x
Could you review my fiction please?
It's not long and I'll give you a virtual cookie!
Thanks x

Meg xoxo

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I didn't know what to put here so I put this.





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Sat May 30, 2009 7:05 am
Anna09 says...



Congrats on the hockey ;)

Could you please review my fiction story, Lost in the Shadows?

Thanks so much. The story really needs to be ripped to shreds-I don't like any aspect of it-to make it wonderful. xD





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Sat May 30, 2009 12:10 pm
afeefah says...



Hello. could you please review my story? there's two chapters.

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Be as harsh as you like! Thanks!

Afeefah :D





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Wed Jun 03, 2009 7:42 am
asxz says...



Oh my gosh... sorry guys. Something screwed up with the reply notification, and I haven't checked it for days! Right onto it, then.
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Mon Jun 08, 2009 4:51 am
asxz says...



Okay, I'm back on the service!
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