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Thu Oct 18, 2007 11:45 pm
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'Lo CCF. noticed you haven't logged on in a while. Is the business still open because I recently ordered a crit.





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Fri Oct 19, 2007 12:12 am
Cabassi_Crime_Family says...



Senz'altro, ragazzo--siamo in ritardo, qualche volte perche, dio mio, la vita e pazza. ^_~

In other words, very much in business if slightly delayed by various ventures vaguely out of simple familial control. You'll have your crit.
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Thu Oct 25, 2007 12:33 pm
Alteran says...



A note to users, Please remember to include a link to your work in your message, it helps eliminate any confusion and saves us a little time.
"Maybe Senpai ate Yuka-tan's last bon-bon?"
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Thu Oct 25, 2007 1:31 pm
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CCF, I request in here not for critque but to join the family. I largely felt unworthy before but admire you're work. Now I critque more and wish to become part of you're extensive network of reviewers.

I know not the right place to ask but couldn't think of anywhere else.
We get off to the rhythm of the trigger and destruction. Fallujah to New Orleans with impunity to kill. We are the hidden fist of the free market.
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Sun Mar 23, 2008 7:07 pm
Sabine says...



I notice the thread hasn't been posted to in a while, is the CCF still open for business? you may have another customer in me.





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Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:06 am
Alteran says...



We are always open m'dear ~_^
"Maybe Senpai ate Yuka-tan's last bon-bon?"
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Sat Mar 29, 2008 5:36 am
Jennafina says...



I just sent a message. This should be interesting. :D
Jennafina's Love Your Body Already Dammit Campaign

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Thu Apr 03, 2008 7:21 am
Jennafina says...



Um, Cabassi? Did you get my message? It's been five days.
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Fri Apr 18, 2008 8:01 pm
Jennafina says...



Sorry about the triple post, (I can delete it later,) but it's been almost a month. Hate to harangue y'all, but this is lousy customer service! ;)
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Fri Apr 18, 2008 8:21 pm
Poor Imp says...



Mi dispiace, Jenna...apologies and all that. THe Cabassi will have to be, er, knocked around a bit, perhaps. They've gotten rather lazy... ^_^;


I'll try to hit it for you within a few days, if not before.









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Sun Jun 15, 2008 6:35 pm
Cabassi_Crime_Family says...



Err, this is sort of a Grand Re-Opening.

The CCF are back in business for sure and we promise that as soon as your message meets our eyes we will be on it like a Cop on Donut.

Due to the failing economy there is now a Discount in prices.

30 Points for an In Depth Review.

5 for a Basic Review.

Bring your Business YWS and you wont be disappointed!
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Mon Jun 16, 2008 6:08 am
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Vernon wrote:CCF, I request in here not for critque but to join the family. I largely felt unworthy before but admire you're work. Now I critque more and wish to become part of you're extensive network of reviewers.

I know not the right place to ask but couldn't think of anywhere else.


No.
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!Hasta la victoria siempre! (Always, until Victory!)
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Mon Jun 16, 2008 6:10 am
sabradan says...



Adam_Atlantian wrote:We are always open m'dear ~_^


We're like 7/11. Not always doing business, but always open.

@Snoink: Leave the gun, take the cannolis.

And CCF will destroy SPEW if its the last thing we do. Dai, ragazzi? Vero?
"He who takes a life...it is as if he has destroyed an entire world....but he who saves one life, it is as if he has saved the world entire" Talmud Sanhedrin 4:5

!Hasta la victoria siempre! (Always, until Victory!)
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Mon Jun 16, 2008 8:57 am
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*munches on cannolis*
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.

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Mon Jun 16, 2008 8:03 pm
Icaruss says...



OK, I got a three-part story called Tangled Up In Blue.

1: post382487.html
2: topic31268.html
3: topic31373.html

I'm guessing I have to pay 30 points for each installment. So. Who do I give my 90 points to? I did read the old post, but since it's a grand re-opening and stuff, maybe the rules have changed? I don't know.
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