Name: Extinguished
Genre: Romance/Horror
Summary: When a man's wife is about to die, a mysterious person shows up and claims to have the ability to save her. (And no, I'm not telling you the ending).
Word Count: 2023 words
Link: topic46620.html
I understand that your time is valuable, so I'm donating 200 points in advance for this critique, (I know it doesn't seem like much, but I don't have many points at the moment). I'll also be willing to donate more points after you critique, (hopefully, I'll have more by then).
Thanks for doing this.
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Points: 890
Reviews: 26