If you could do this I would be very thankful. Its a fantasy fiction, though its not in the part of having a lot of magic yet. But I think I have the part with a taste of it in here.
Pretty pretty please, Clo? *adorable puppy dog eyes*
I'll be forever in your debt. It's supposed to be horror, for Cat and June's Horror Contest. I'd appreciate tips on how to make it more...horrific? And all-around, of course.
Thanks.
~Evi
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.
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So this story is Romance, but I understand if you don't want to review it because its gay romance. Though, if you do critique it, you can be as harsh as you want!
Thanks!
MV
I realized that I said I'd be gone for only two weeks...but I was gone for much longer.I hope to stay on this time.
Edna began to feel like one who awakens gradually out of a dream, a delicious, grotesque, impossible dream, to feel again the realities pressing into her soul. — Kate Chopin, The Awakening
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