Young Writers Society

Haha You seem pretty much in need of things to review, so I hope you don't mind if I post two links!

Here's the first, called Please, Daddy, Don't Shout. (RIP TO SHREDS. It's for a contest)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36307.html

The second is called Fatal Choices. It's... gruesome.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic32755.html


Thank you!! *Hugs*

Xxx Do

Done about two/three months ago with those.


Back in business, maybe...


---Jon---

Well, as you're asking...

A review of Chapter One of The Broken (fantasy) would be most appreciated. ^_^

I need a review!!!1

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36987.html

Lord Anzius, you're done!

Will work on Chp. 1 a little later sureal!
I'm excited to read it because i never have and I've been seeing it everywhere on here, it seems!

Done Sureal!
Next?


---Jon---

Anyone here?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39033.html

It's called "Blind." I don't know if you do sci-fi, but there it is.

You'll have it by tomorrow.


Thanks


---Jon---

I am updating this.
(Gasp!) Stori, I am so sorry! I said you'd have it tommorrow and i most likely forgot! I'm sorry!
Anyway. Review time.


---Jon---

Please!


topic41007.html

well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though its a fanfiction. All you need to know is that "Silent Hill" is a town that people's worst fears take shape.

topic40923.html

If you need to know what is happening Beth is looking for her missing sister. Right now she is currently in Silent Hill, with Sera. Sera is a really nice person who wants to help Beth, however Beth hates Sera.

prologue- Beth has a dream that her sister disappears, and it comes true

ch1- 4 years later Beth (18 years old) thinks about the past, and how no one really looked for her sister (Alex). Sera makes her appearance. Its highschool graduation day, and Beth leaves her hometown (Ashfield) and heads to Silent hill to find her sister. (Since she got a note in Alex's handwriting saying "Silent Hill").

ch2- Beth's car brakes down, and she has a strange dream. After she wakes up, Beth hitchhikes, and surprisingly Sera appears and offers her a ride. When they are driving Beth falls asleep, and has a nightmare.

ch3- topic40923.html

please review it *Begs*

Zoorah -- Done.
Maki-- you're up next!


---Jon---

Maki-- you're done!


Next please.


---Jon---

topic41732.html

It might be residing in the romantic fiction section but please do it anyway?