Young Writers Society

You're done, TLG! And I just have to say that I'm loving your story more and more as each chapter is posted.


Now accepting more requests.

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I need a proof read from the Prof. =D

How did I not notice this yesterday? Tsk. I don't do too much on-lining during the weekend - too much housework and stupid tabletop RPGs - but if I do hop on I will do a review for you. If I don't, I will do a review for you on Monday. Fair enough?

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I need help with this!

-Jared

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I can haz next chapter reviewed, plz?

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Um... hi. Please? Btw, is there anything of your's you want reviewed?

Not just at present. I don't really have anything posted.

I'm trying to write things for a couple of contests, and one or two other short projects, so I'll let you know when I need a review.

I am now caught up on reviews. However, if you post a story for me to review, be aware that the entrants in my vampire contest will each be receiving a review on their story, and then the winners will be receiving reviews on other pieces in their portfolio, so it will likely be some time before I am able to get around to reviewing the pieces posted here. I'll also be composing some contest entries, so I'd recommend waiting for another update before requesting a review from me.

I would love it if you would do this

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P.S.-- I really did do the other half, I don't know why it didn't show up!

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Again, just remember that the reviews in this thread are currently last on my list of priorities. This is not always the case, and I will post again when this changes, but, for now, be aware that you are not likely to receive your requested review for some time.

Wise, your review is complete. And I'm now open for business again, though, as always, I can't necessarily guarantee a swift response.

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I don't mind if it's not that swift... before the 25th would be nice, as it's for a contest, and it needs lots of help. It's fairly short, though.

Thank you excruciatingly!

This thread has been a bit dead-ish, because I have been lazy. I hereby re-open it.

TLG - I am so sorry I missed your contest deadline! If you still want me to review your piece, please let me know. Please also give me anything else you want me to review so that I can make up for my tardiness!

I would really appreciate a critique for my new story:
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Thanks!

I'm about to take off for the day, so I'll look at it tomorrow.

BTW, love the avi.