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Mon Jul 21, 2008 12:08 am
BigBadBear says...



Done! I'm now totally free. Please send in your links. I'm available right now. Send me everything... but fantasy. Please. No more of that.

-Jared

PS: I'll do better if it is a series. I like series.

-Jared
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Would love help on this.





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Mon Jul 21, 2008 1:21 am
niccy_v says...



Mine's a kind of series... well there's half 1 and half 2 which i haven't broken down into chapters yet. Take a look:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33253.html
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Mon Jul 21, 2008 2:37 am
BigBadBear says...



Done.
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

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Mon Jul 21, 2008 4:38 am
Bittersweet says...



topic30972.html

Have fun. o.o Heh.
eviscerate your fragile frame
spill it out in ragged form
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Mon Jul 28, 2008 1:23 am
Conrad Rice says...



Would you so kindly please? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33308.html
Garrus Vakarian is my homeboy.





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Mon Jul 28, 2008 4:09 am
BigBadBear says...



Done, Conrad.
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.





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Mon Jul 28, 2008 6:04 pm
StellaThomas says...



Oh Jaaaaaared?

Can you review my piece "Faerie Wings" for Cal's character contest. It's only the first one, and it's very short.
"Stella. You were in my dream the other night. And everyone called you Princess." -Lauren2010





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Mon Jul 28, 2008 10:18 pm
BigBadBear says...



Done, Stella.

Any more?

-Jared
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Would love help on this.





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Tue Jul 29, 2008 5:42 pm
BigBadBear says...



*bump* Give me critiques, YWSers. Now. I'm bored out of my mind.

-Jared
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Would love help on this.





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Tue Jul 29, 2008 10:44 pm
Sportgurl46 says...



ok, so i badly want this critiqued, and can't seem to find anyone to do it, so if you could help me that would be just absolutely amazing :) i am trying to see if it is good enough for me to say it's finished. it's poetry so i hope that's ok.
topic31313.html
omg lol thx HD!





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Wed Jul 30, 2008 12:45 am
BigBadBear says...



Done.

Next?
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Wed Jul 30, 2008 2:49 am
PenguinAttack says...



Be a good Boy. ^^

I'd really appreciate a crit on this: post398962.html#398962 if you could? It's for a contest due soon, so be harsh and enjoy. ^^

*Hearts* Le Penguin.
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Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:31 pm
BigBadBear says...



Done, Penguin.

Next, please.

-Jared
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Would love help on this.





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Fri Aug 01, 2008 12:45 am
Clo says...



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Jared, you are my knight in shining... bear fur. ^_^
How am I not myself?





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Sun Aug 03, 2008 5:23 am
Lethero says...



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Hi 3b. I need a review too if you have the time, please. I'm pretty sure I can trust your reviews like I can trust Jabbs.

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