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Sun Oct 11, 2009 9:10 am
Mo. says...



Hey Amy,

Can you please review my poem? It's Narrative Poetry.

Storm

Thanks. :D

~Mo.
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Sun Oct 11, 2009 9:22 am
AquaMarine says...



Hero's is done and yes, Mo. I'll get right on it ...
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Sun Oct 11, 2009 10:15 am
AquaMarine says...



Done Mo! Lovely!
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Sun Oct 11, 2009 4:43 pm
Jetpack says...



Aqua, hey there. I need a bit of a hand with this story I just posted. It's Romantic Fiction, about 900 words, called All of the Stars. I appreciate nitpicks because I think my wording's off in places. Eheh, mention if you think the characters are flat, but I'm not thinking major revision on this. Just some general pointers on that side of things, and I'd be really grateful! I'm out of my comfort zone so anything you say, even just as a reader, will help me out a lot. But anyway, I see you have a lot of review traffic most of the time, so no rush if you're busy. It's only been posted in the last 24 hours.

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Sun Oct 11, 2009 4:56 pm
AquaMarine says...



Right, I'll get right on it! And I have no queue xD.
By the way, this'll be my 70th review (I don't count *cough*) so be double proud xD.
~Amy
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Sun Oct 11, 2009 11:55 pm
infinite reality says...



I dont know how to link, but Fire Burns Deep, in the fantasy section. There's a prolouge and two chapters. Also Red, poetry. You dont have to do any, but thats just my stuff
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Thu Oct 15, 2009 5:35 pm
AquaMarine says...



Okay guys, my list is done! Please give me some requests!
~Amy
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Thu Oct 22, 2009 10:54 pm
Pretty Crazy says...



Please do this. I'm asking as many people as possible for their opinions.
topic53725.html
Thanks! :smt003
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Sat Oct 24, 2009 3:21 pm
AquaMarine says...



Done! Sorry it was a little late.

~Amy
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Sat Oct 24, 2009 10:31 pm
pudin.junidf says...



Hey AM!

can you please review this for me?
It's called Bye for Now, but it's only the first part.

post615795.html#p615795

thanks so much for your help.
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Thu Nov 05, 2009 10:17 pm
*writewatiwant* says...



Amy! Guess what? I'm here to help you with your review count! You needed 18, right? And I don't want this on December, so please take fifteen minutes out of NaNo xD

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Thu Nov 05, 2009 10:22 pm
AquaMarine says...



Take time out of NaNo?!

Ok, just for you. But it'll be tomorrow 'cause there's a good TV program on right now. :D
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Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:41 pm
Young gun says...



topic54181.html

a short poem.
Too bad we don't live to experinece death





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Sat Nov 07, 2009 9:14 am
AquaMarine says...



Kat's is done! I'll probably have to do yours tomorrow, Gun. (Sorry)

~Amy
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Sat Nov 14, 2009 7:24 am
anima9 says...



please take your time to review a piece. it's short :)

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