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Fri Jan 02, 2009 5:56 am
anti-pop says...



TL - finished with your first request
Mistress - almost done
kissthewitch - working on it
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...

-Libretto





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Mon Jan 05, 2009 1:12 am
Night Mistress says...



hey, anti-pop

can you review this for me?

topic41359.html

it's fantasy.
"I love you," she whispered in his ear, before taking his mouth with her own.

~Elizzabeth Grey of Addicting Posion





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Sat Jan 10, 2009 8:32 am
anti-pop says...



Mistress - done with chapters 1 and 2!
kissthewitch - it'll be done soon!
niccy - I'll get to it :D
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...

-Libretto





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Sat Jan 10, 2009 4:40 pm
Night Mistress says...



anti-pop,

could you be a dear and review the re-write of the prologue? it's called Addicting Poison now.

topic40437.html

thanks.

P.s: forget that request to review the fantasy one. i had it locked.
"I love you," she whispered in his ear, before taking his mouth with her own.

~Elizzabeth Grey of Addicting Posion





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Tue Jan 13, 2009 6:04 pm
vox nihili says...



I have part 2 of something I think you already read the first part to. A Bird In Katie's Head: here's the link. topic41879.html
Thanks,
--Vox





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Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:08 am
anti-pop says...



kissthewitch - finished. Very nice, kw!
niccy - done! I love it!
TL - [s]working on it as we speak.[/s] Aw, man. Locked? >.< I was almost finished lol.

I'm slowly but surely catching up. *sigh*
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...

-Libretto





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Thu Jan 22, 2009 6:54 am
anti-pop says...



Mistress - accidentally did vox's first, so yours will be done ASAP.
Voxina - finished! Nice work. :)
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...

-Libretto





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Thu Jan 22, 2009 2:43 pm
Rosendorn says...



Mind shredding this?

topic42204.html

It's for Jabs' contest, so it might be a good idea to listen to the song at the end. And I know about the beginning. You don't need to point it out! It's in Other Fiction.

Totally willing to return the favour. Keep in mind I do poetry and art as well as fiction.
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.





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Thu Jan 22, 2009 5:18 pm
anti-pop says...



Mistress - done! Much improvement!
Rosey - done! Good luck in the contest! :D

C'mon, people! I need to get reviewing! This helps motivate me more!
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...

-Libretto





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Sun Jan 25, 2009 7:13 am
anti-pop says...



*twiddles thumbs*


:)
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...

-Libretto





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Sun Jan 25, 2009 9:23 am
Pippiedooda says...



Hi :) could you review some of my work? There's three parts to the story, i mainly want the last two parts reviewed but they might not make much sense if you haven't read the first bit. They're not too long, thanks so much! :D
topic42028.html
topic42270.html
topic42561.html





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Mon Jan 26, 2009 5:51 pm
Rosendorn says...



From nothing to four in one day!

topic42637.html

Revised version of Christmas Magic. I need this review asap; the contest ends the Friday.

Please and thank you!
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.





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Mon Jan 26, 2009 6:29 pm
Stori says...



Anti, could you review this one?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39033.html

Many thanks!





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Wed Jan 28, 2009 3:48 am
asxz says...



Hello, Review please!

Prologue
Chapter 1 part 1
Chapter 1 part 2

Rip 'em to shreds and post A.S.A.P

Thank you so much, I desperately need to know if anyone likes it!!!
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Thu Jan 29, 2009 10:22 pm
anti-pop says...



Pippiedooda & Rosey - done! Nice job, both of you! :D
Stori & asxz - Should be done by today.
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...

-Libretto








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