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Done Angel

Anyone else ?
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here is mine.

this is the first chapter. it's called Poison Love.

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Please I don't know if it's good or not.
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this is the second chapter.

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KissTheWitch I've done your's
I've done your's too Teddy xD

-Kirsten xxx

These have been edited just a few days ago... But I'm not sure if they got that better. Help me (makes doggy eyes)

Well This Shouldn't be! :

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36987.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37125.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37502.html

Now, this started off as a story piece for English, but now I have it handed in and graded, I was thinking that I would love to expand on it a bit more. So, I would love a harsh, truthful critique, please, to help me along with this new working progress.
It's in 'Other Fiction' and is a short horror story. Please, take your time on it, here is the link and many, many thanks in advance!!

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--Lucyy xx

topic33121.html - this is the third chapter.

topic34921.html - this is chapter 4.

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I would love you forever if you could sink your teeth into my piece and absolutly rip it to shreds!

Okay everyone; I'll have them done in a few hours
-Kirsten xxxx

Scasha, your's is done, I'm working on the rest

Lucyy your's is done too

everyone's is done
record timing = 2 hours
-Kirsten xxx