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Sun Feb 22, 2009 10:08 am
deleted2 says...



School craziness is currently manageable ... so this thread is officially re-opened!

Also, I have a week of holiday right now. Reviewing spree? Sure thing.

*Dusts off the old thread ^^*

Reviews, my dears?

XxxDo





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Sun Feb 22, 2009 10:30 am
anti-pop says...



The Childhood of Mr. O'Connor
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Just some general comments would be fantastic. Thanks! ^^


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Sun Feb 22, 2009 10:57 am
deleted2 says...



Done, Poppy dearest !

Who's next? :wink:

XxxDo





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Sun Feb 22, 2009 8:24 pm
BigBadBear says...



I'd like a review on Llama Boy. I know the title's kinda discouraging... but...

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Would love help on this.





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Sun Feb 22, 2009 9:18 pm
Sachiko says...



Hey, Dee! ^^

Just posted chapter one of my nano, like you asked!

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Feel free to get to it when you can! Thank you very, very much!

Sachi
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Mon Feb 23, 2009 3:16 am
asxz says...



Hi, I think you reviewed my work? Anyway, I have re-done the prologue for my pending story, Action/Adventure fiction, Link here!

THANKS SO MUCH!
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Tue Feb 24, 2009 9:07 am
deleted2 says...



Done, Teddy ^^

Edit: Done, kitteh dearest!

Asxz, I'm off to review yours now. And yes, I've reviewed for you before... All the chapters of Split Personality that you've posted so far, in fact ;) so I can tell you what I think of the improvements you made.

XxxDo





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Wed Feb 25, 2009 11:04 pm
Rosendorn says...



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I now have something new for you to review!
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Thu Feb 26, 2009 9:13 am
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Done and done ^^

Now I'm off to review some works requested via PM's, but I think I'll be done soon.

Anyone, want a review?

*prods you*

Xxx





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Tue Jun 06, 2023 8:57 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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