Poetry Shreds

Lumi · 2011-10-05T19:53:20Z

I review Poetry, Scripts, Ambiguous wtfs, etc. Sweet talk me enough, and I may touch stories or chapters. It'd be cool if you'd designate how much mercy you want with your request. Leave a link to the piece, and I'll get to it.

Jas

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Tue Nov 22, 2011 1:07 am

Jas says... · Tue Nov 22, 2011 1:07 am

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Ice cream, chocolate strawberries and many rainbow unicorns will be rewarded to you if you review this. :] Please and thanks!

I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~

peanutgallery007

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Tue Nov 22, 2011 7:39 am

peanutgallery007 says... · Tue Nov 22, 2011 7:39 am

I would love it if you could review my poem for me. Something seems wrong with it but the two comments it has don't really help.

Thanks

Have a peanut =)

Try your hand at my poetry contest!

Proud LGBT supporter.

Lumi

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Sat May 12, 2012 10:58 am

Lumi says... · Sat May 12, 2012 10:58 am

Now Open For Business

Come get yer soup.

I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.

-Shinji Moon

I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.

GrymmRipper

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Thu May 17, 2012 10:39 am

GrymmRipper says... · Thu May 17, 2012 10:39 am

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If you could review this poem of mine it would be really helpful!
Thank you so much!

Sanity is nonexistent. =_=''

Need reviews for this poem : work.php?id=93702
Thank you so much!

Karzkin

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Tue May 22, 2012 4:18 pm

Karzkin says... · Tue May 22, 2012 4:18 pm

Do your thing, baby.

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.

MischiefManaged

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Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:07 am

MischiefManaged says... · Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:07 am

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Really need to develop this and got no help at all. So if you may so kindly review it?

Thank you so much!

SkyLore

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Sat Jun 02, 2012 6:03 pm

SkyLore says... · Sat Jun 02, 2012 6:03 pm

I was hoping that maybe, possibly, you could review this for me...

Not too hound you or anything...I won't turn into the Hulk if you say no.
Wait...I can't make any promises about that one, sorry.

-shy's away-

Lumi

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Wed Aug 08, 2012 5:58 am

Lumi says... · Wed Aug 08, 2012 5:58 am

Open again. I still have backtrack to handle with the dudes and dudettes who've requested before, though.

I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.

-Shinji Moon

I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.