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borntobeawriter · 2010-11-27T16:10:31Z

Hey everyone! I'm constantly browsing this site in hopes of finding another great chapter to reviewer. But I've decided to play it smart and let you come to me, instead. *laughs evilly* So come one, come all, and let me work my magic! What I will review: Fantasy Action/Adventure Romance General fiction. Both in short story and novel length. For the rest of the categories, I'm simply not very good at them and my reviews wouldn't be worth much. Also, I would really appreciate a comeback to my reviews. Either on this thread, or following my review on your own thread. I often go through a lot of my time and quite some patience to review and it would be nice to know it helped. Or not. :D These a few examples of my reviews: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post788677.html#p788677 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post787353.html#p787353 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post785938.html#p785938 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post783670.html#p783670 My reasons for sharing these links? I can be very thorough, and sometimes, some might perceive me as harsh. I try to be as delicate as possible and demonstrate the good points as much as the bad. But if you read these and don't like my reviewing style, then please don't ask me to review; It's just annoying and rude to tell me my review stinks because you have not yet become accustomed to critism. Don't forget to link your chapter with your request and feel free to ask me for a review; I will get to it as soon as possible! I would like to add something here. I have a weird schedule. My fiancé is a trucker and when he's home, I stay away from the internet. So, if he's home, and you request a review, it might take a couple days. If not, I'm not it like jam on peanut butter. ;)

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Sun Jan 23, 2011 12:30 pm

Sins says... · Sun Jan 23, 2011 12:30 pm

Tanyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. Hai.

Would you do me the honer of reviewing the next part of Stop and Stare for me, please?

topic75164.html

Thanks.

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

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Sun Jan 23, 2011 2:12 pm

borntobeawriter says... · Sun Jan 23, 2011 2:12 pm

Pointe, Skinsy: done!

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Mon Jan 24, 2011 10:42 pm

PaulClover says... · Mon Jan 24, 2011 10:42 pm

Wow

You really are dedicated!

If you could, I would really appreciate any and all reviews for my novella-in-progress, "In Memoriam." I recently finished Part 3, but any new reviews and critique would be nice!

Part 1: viewtopic.php?t=74464
Part 2: viewtopic.php?t=74829
Part 3: viewtopic.php?t=75284

Remember your name. Do not lose hope — what you seek will be found. Trust ghosts. Trust those that you have helped to help you in their turn. Trust dreams. Trust your heart, and trust your story. - Neil Gaiman

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Sat Jan 29, 2011 10:40 pm

d@ydre@mer27 says... · Sat Jan 29, 2011 10:40 pm

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Chapter 9!!
And 10 is on the way in a few hours.....sorry this is such a long time coming!
Thanks in advance, hope you like it!
~day

"A black cat crossing your path signifies that the animal is going somewhere." ~courtesy of one of history's funniest men, Groucho Marx. ^_^

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Mon Jan 31, 2011 3:38 am

abba315 says... · Mon Jan 31, 2011 3:38 am

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Ahh, I want to submit this (and, yes, I realize I only have a day

) but I think it needs hefty editing and reviewing! I'd love for you to review it, given that your reviews seem to be thorough and good. Thanks

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Tue Feb 01, 2011 1:08 am

borntobeawriter says... · Tue Feb 01, 2011 1:08 am

Paul, day, abba : done!

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Tue Feb 01, 2011 9:51 pm

Sins says... · Tue Feb 01, 2011 9:51 pm

Tanya! ^^

Could you review the next part of Stop and Stare for me, please?

post817076.html#p817076

Please and thank you!

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Thu Feb 03, 2011 5:06 pm

LadySpark says... · Thu Feb 03, 2011 5:06 pm

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ch. 7 of the Magi
please review!!!

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

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Sun Feb 13, 2011 6:00 am

fight4whatisright says... · Sun Feb 13, 2011 6:00 am

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Tue Feb 15, 2011 2:29 am

rolf18 says... · Tue Feb 15, 2011 2:29 am

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Mine is the prologue to a longer novel, which I'm going to post shortly, and falls into the action/adventure drama. If you could review it that would be great!

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Wed Feb 16, 2011 12:00 pm

Gheala says... · Wed Feb 16, 2011 12:00 pm

Hey, Tanya. *waves enthusiastically* How have you been, girl??

I've written a new excerpt. Remember the last 'Selim' piece you read? Well, this one is only a page or two after what you've read. And I've finally showed Julius' love to him and Selim's kindness as well.

topic76350.html

I'll be truly thankful if you take a look at it.
Thanks, Sweets.

I'm back to my YWS after months of disappearance, hoping that I'd gain the immunity of books and quills against the harmful realism of our world.

In case this made no sense, I'm just saying that I'm happy I'm back!

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Thu Feb 17, 2011 2:13 pm

borntobeawriter says... · Thu Feb 17, 2011 2:13 pm

Skins, Pointe, Fighta, Rolf and Gheala: done!

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Mon Feb 21, 2011 4:17 pm

MilkNCookies says... · Mon Feb 21, 2011 4:17 pm

OOH! Pretty please? It's for Skin's contest... : ) topic76573.htm

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Mon Feb 21, 2011 5:32 pm

borntobeawriter says... · Mon Feb 21, 2011 5:32 pm

Milk, done!

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Sat Feb 26, 2011 6:38 am

Kafkaescence says... · Sat Feb 26, 2011 6:38 am

I'll give it a go.

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“Such nonsense!" declared Dr Greysteel. "Whoever heard of cats doing anything useful!" "Except for staring at one in a supercilious manner," said Strange. "That has a sort of moral usefulness, I suppose, in making one feel uncomfortable and encouraging sober reflection upon one's imperfections.”
— Susanna Clarke, Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell

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