Sorry, if my review was too short because I think there are only small things to nitpick or to correct on, Puffy Cherry. It's because I think that piece was very well-written! Good job on that!
Anyone else?
"Life is a poem keep it in the present tense."-Sherrel Wigal
I think you forgot about what I asked in the chat =) Oh well, nevermind that. I've rewritten it anyway, so if you feel like it this time, there's the link =) Sinful Pride - Chapter 2
Have a nice day! Kyou
~Don't beg for things, do it yourself or else you'll never get anything~ -Formerly Shinda
Maybe what most people wanted wasn't immortality and fame, but the reassurance that their existence had meant something. No matter how long... or how brief. Maybe being eternal meant becoming a story worth telling. — Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality
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