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It's a poem but I'd really appreciate it if you'd check it out




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done!


Anyone else? *puppy eyes*
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Hello,

I am currently writing a new fantasy novel and would truly appreciate if you'd review the first chapter.

Information:

Genre: Fantasy
Title: Ecole des Monstres
Link: post724784.html#p724784

Thanks, in advance.
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Done!

Sorry, if my review was too short because I think there are only small things to nitpick or to correct on, Puffy Cherry. It's because I think that piece was very well-written! Good job on that! ;)

Anyone else?
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I think you forgot about what I asked in the chat =) Oh well, nevermind that. I've rewritten it anyway, so if you feel like it this time, there's the link =) Sinful Pride - Chapter 2

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Done, kyou!

Anyone else?

:3

Please?
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Hi Yuri! :D

I was wondering if you could review my piece? Here's the information:

Genre: Sci-Fi
Title: The Robot With Human Hair, Prologue. (It's a working title for now, until something better comes along. :smt003 )
Link: Right here.

Thanks! :3

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done, Spork! :D

Love it!

anyone else?
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Title: Wolfsbane, Mustard-seed and Silver
Genre: Fantasy/alternate history
Link: post731299.html#p731299

Please be as harsh as possible! :D
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Title: Discovery
Genre: general fiction
Link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=64517

(Don't worry, it doesn't get disturbing. You'll know what I mean when you start reading it.) Thank you!
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Hi! Would you mind reading my romantic fiction called "Bald is Beautiful?" It's rated E, so it isn't over 16 or 18! :D
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Munchkin and Kaila- Done!

:3

TL- G- I'm working on it. :wink:
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Hey Yuriko. Shubhi back for you for another review.

Here's the link and it would e great if you could get on it soon, as it's a project: Chilly Farm.

It's the worst I have ever written. But you should have seen the topic.

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TL- G- Done!

Shubhi- working on it. :wink:
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Could I trouble you to review this? Whenever you have the time. Thanks a bunch in advance! :D
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