Sorry, if my review was too short because I think there are only small things to nitpick or to correct on, Puffy Cherry. It's because I think that piece was very well-written! Good job on that!
Anyone else?
"Life is a poem keep it in the present tense."-Sherrel Wigal
I think you forgot about what I asked in the chat =) Oh well, nevermind that. I've rewritten it anyway, so if you feel like it this time, there's the link =) Sinful Pride - Chapter 2
Have a nice day! Kyou
~Don't beg for things, do it yourself or else you'll never get anything~ -Formerly Shinda
'This must be Thursday,' said Arthur to himself, sinking low over his beer. 'I never could get the hang of Thursdays.' — Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy
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