Beeviews (closed for three weeks from 27-7-09)

I can't be on here much so thought I'd get a couple of reviews to do and it will keep me happy.

I'm not a super duper critiquer but am happy to check spelling, grammar, word/phrase choices etc.

I will critique:

Action
Fantasy
Romance
Historical fiction - my fave
Photography

My NO list:

Sci-fi
Scripts
Poetry (love poetry but don't really know how to critique it)
Fanfiction
And anything else I haven't mentioned

Rules:

Nothing over PG13 - I'd especially like to avoid foul language and anything explicit
I will only do one a week sorry, as I'm REALLY busy as it is, and this is mostly to keep my writing streak going!
Please let me know how many words it is, and post a link to it.

Thanks!

In exchange I will be asking you to critique one story I may post in the future. I'll let you know when! Does that sound fair?

Hey!

I would love to review something in exchange, if you would feel up to reviewing this for me:

Invitations
This is the first 1/2 of a prologue. It's 868 words.

Get to it when you can, I'm patient!

I'm really sorry I haven't had time to do your critique yet! life is hectic!

Hi!!! Um... I have a story you can review. If it's okay. the story is:

Name: Learning the Truth
Genre: Other Fiction
Rated:PG

If you have free time on your hands I'd very much appreciate it. Can I ask for something? Could you try not to be to harsh? Okay? Bye!!!!!!

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