Thanks for the review to The Last Good Man a while back. And I would be honored and grateful if you would check out another one for me. Of Futility And Shattered Tranquility http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic44438.html
Hello! Would you be so kind and review part of my story? It's the most recent part so If you want to read the other parts you can but I'll give you some background on it so you don't have to.
A girl finds out that her best friend's mom committed suicide. So the friend is really upset and he must decide if he will stay with his step dad in his hometown with his friends or go live with his dad. The girl is trying to help but she is really confused on how to because she's never been through something like that.
You can be as harsh as you want. I really need to improve this part so...
Link: topic44538.html Genre: Other Fiction
So, if you have time I'd appreciate if you would review this for me.
Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things you didn't do than by the ones you did. So throw off the bowlines, sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. — Mark Twain
