Will Review Anything!!

asxz · 2009-01-24T07:11:45Z

:smt006 Trying to boost my reviews, So I will review ANYTHING , to the BEST of my ability (which is pretty good!) Please post a link to your story/whatever, and tell me how harsh a critique you are looking for, and I'll do my best!! I ask for nothing in return... only that you come back! And come back again... and again... until you are slave to my powerful critiques! :smt079 :smt065 :smt063 Please don't feel dtered if there is already a critique waiting, I'm posting daily, so it doesn't matter. The more, the better in my opinion!

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Mon Feb 23, 2009 4:45 am

asxz says... · Mon Feb 23, 2009 4:45 am

Right, I'm up to date. Anything else?

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Mon Feb 23, 2009 4:57 am

PatriciaTina says... · Mon Feb 23, 2009 4:57 am

Hi! I really need this reviewed. It's my first edit. The story isn't near done, but anyways, here's the link: topic44125.html

Thanks in advance! I really really appreciate this!

~ Patricia Tina :smt006

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Wed Feb 25, 2009 8:44 am

asxz says... · Wed Feb 25, 2009 8:44 am

Mod cow, Your review is complete!

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Wed Feb 25, 2009 4:20 pm

MySunshine says... · Wed Feb 25, 2009 4:20 pm

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic43503.html

You can be as harsh as you want to - I appreciate any form of feedback

Thank you in advance

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Sat Feb 28, 2009 1:39 am

Anna09 says... · Sat Feb 28, 2009 1:39 am

topic44396.html

As harsh as you feel necessary!
Thanks so much

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Sat Feb 28, 2009 7:14 pm

asxz says... · Sat Feb 28, 2009 7:14 pm

Done... Next please!

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Sat Feb 28, 2009 7:27 pm

Lauren says... · Sat Feb 28, 2009 7:27 pm

Would you be so kind?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic44420.html
It's Other Fiction.
Pwetty pwease?

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Sat Feb 28, 2009 8:37 pm

asxz says... · Sat Feb 28, 2009 8:37 pm

Sure, I'm on it!

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Sun Mar 01, 2009 3:22 am

EmmVeePi says... · Sun Mar 01, 2009 3:22 am

Thanks for the review to The Last Good Man a while back. And I would be honored and grateful if you would check out another one for me. Of Futility And Shattered Tranquility http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic44438.html

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Sun Mar 01, 2009 9:57 pm

mhmmcolleenx0 says... · Sun Mar 01, 2009 9:57 pm

Hello! Would you be so kind and review part of my story? It's the most recent part so If you want to read the other parts you can but I'll give you some background on it so you don't have to.

A girl finds out that her best friend's mom committed suicide. So the friend is really upset and he must decide if he will stay with his step dad in his hometown with his friends or go live with his dad. The girl is trying to help but she is really confused on how to because she's never been through something like that.

You can be as harsh as you want. I really need to improve this part so...
Link: topic44538.html
Genre: Other Fiction

So, if you have time I'd appreciate if you would review this for me.

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Mon Mar 02, 2009 5:08 am

asxz says... · Mon Mar 02, 2009 5:08 am

Keep 'em coming people!

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Mon Mar 02, 2009 9:08 am

Serendipity Blues says... · Mon Mar 02, 2009 9:08 am

Much obliged if you reviewed this.

Thankyooou!

Fancy a Review?

Moo.

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Tue Mar 03, 2009 6:14 am

asxz says... · Tue Mar 03, 2009 6:14 am

Okay... done! Keep 'em coming!

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Sat Mar 07, 2009 11:48 pm

asxz says... · Sat Mar 07, 2009 11:48 pm

Come on... I'm getting bored now!

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Mon Mar 09, 2009 9:09 pm

xDudettex says... · Mon Mar 09, 2009 9:09 pm

Hey asxz =]

You said you were bored so would you please be so kind as to review my March CIA contest entry? Your opinion will be greatly appreciated!

It's called Letting go and is posted in other fiction.

topic44860.html

Thank you!

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