hey i'm a new member on yws and will review most anything only i have a couple of rules: it can't be super long or have really big words that i don't understand lol....so i'm ready to review
Would you ever be so kind as to review my new entry? It's a prologue, so it's not too long. Here is a link.... topic77210.html Thanks a lot! Really appreciate it! -Jojo
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