O.K I'm tired of slacking off, and I want to review. I need to review something (since I haven't in a long time.) And It's hard for me to just go to the writing forums and pick one of the stories (There are too many good ones ).
So now I will make you my good client to choose me a story instead.
I'll review anything. Yes! You heard me! Everything.
from essays to fantasy. From fantasy to Sci Fi etc..
Here are what I'll be critiquing:
Grammar
I'm not big on grammar, but if you wish me to be big on grammar I'll find myself a grammar book and check every last word in your book.
Word choices
I'll check your word choices. I'll tell you if they sound right, feel right or create the right kind of mood for your story.
Characters
I will check your character development, how you describe them and how you write them. What should be done differently.
Description
Some people describe too much, some people too little.
Dialogue
How do your characters speak. Is it forced, is it funny. I will tell you, the dialogue is a big part of a story is it not?
-Are you telling or showing (with explanation, and not just the "You're telling when you should be showing it to us..."
)
-and anything else that might come my way.
I want to point out that if you want me to review fan-fiction tell me the subject of the story.
I'll take 5 clients at a time, non more.
And this is ll free.
When will the review be done?
They will be done latest Sunday evening.
keep 'em coming
:)
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