Young Writers Society

If you'd like to support my New Year's Resolution [s](the one I just made up)[/s], then be awesome and ask me to review some of your lyk rly kool stuffz!

xD Sorry 'bout that. Felt like getting a bit noobish. Haven't done that in a while. But, anyhoo, on to the dreaded guidelines!

Monki Knows Best

I Review...

-Poetry (No "emo" crap, thanks.)
-Fan-Fiction
-Scripts
-Romantic Fiction
-Art/Photography
-Historical Fiction
-Lyrics
-Non-Fiction


I'd Much Rather Not Critique...

-Anything "emo" (I assume that speaks for itself.)
-Action/Adventure
-Fantasy
-Sci-Fi

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To-Critique:

1. [s]"Christmas Magic" by Rosey Unicorn[/s]
2. [s]"Forbidden Love" by Night Mistress[/s]
3. "Orilie Davis" - Prologue by wisemann210
4. "Here Comes Goodbye" - Prologue by Rascalover
5. "My Life's Wings" by Forever Threnody
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Awesomely Finished Critiques By Moi:
1. "Christmas Magic" by Rosey Unicorn
2. "Forbidden Love" by Night Mistress
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So, got all that? Good. Now, just one thing: You no follow strict guidelines... MONKI CRUSH YOU!

*ahem* Now that that's settled, if all guidelines are followed, you may now proceed and give me the title of your piece, the genre, and the link.

Also, I'd prefer only one thing at a time, but if it's urgent, I'll allow more. Just PM me.

Oh, right! I'm at review number 92 right now. Who ever gets my 100th review gets 50 points. I know it's not much, and I have no reasoning, I just feel like celebrating, and to celebrate, I'll give points. xD

Ask away, dear ones!

Update: Sorry if I'm taking a while to get to your critique. Life is a lot more hectic than I expected it to be lately. But, I will get to it, and if I take more than two days to get to your critique, I'll award you with fifty points and still do the critique. :] (Also, feel free to send me a PM and give me a nudge in the right direction, remind me that I have crits to do. :}

Can you review this for me, Monki?

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It's my latest work. If you get infended by the material in it, you don't have to review it.

Thanks so much.

www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic42369.html
It's Realistic Fiction, I would really appreciate it! (only 900 or so words.)
Entitled, 'Orilie Davis' - (Prolouge)

Thankyou!


---Jon---

*bumps own thread*

Come on people! I only have Jon's critique left to do and then I'm left with no requests!

*bribes with cookie* You knooooow you want a review!

will you review this please
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Genre: Romantic fiction
word count:1170ish

Can you pretty please review this? Just so you know this was a sudden impulse song. And Isaac Slade is The Fray's lead singer. They say they're not a Christian band but...

Here you go. Tear er' apart!
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Hey Monki,

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This is chapter one of Forbidden Love. Can you review it?

Thanks

Hallo, Monki! ^_^ I'm Hannah, and I'd greatly appreciate if you could review/critique my Unzipped. It's under romantic fiction, so I hope you'll enjoy it! Feel free, if you're interested after the first chapter, to progress to the rest {though I'm working the kinks out of the fourth and final chapter}.

Here's the link!

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Yay~

Many thanks, though I will thank you after the fact as well! ^_^

-Hannah-

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

-ALICE