I'm here to find something to review, It's hard for me to just go to the writing forums and pick one of the stories (There are too many good ones
).
So now I will make you my good client to choose me a story instead.
I will review almost anything.
The things I do not review:
(1) Art (unless it is a comic, in which case I may´be able to help.)
(2) Non-fiction
I'll review everything else. But don't expect a superb critiques from poetry or lyrics.
Here are what I'll be critiquing:
Grammar
In example, I'll check are the words written correctly, and a little of punctuation. I won't be so hard on grammar.
Word choices
I'll check your word choices. I'll tell you if they sound right, feel right or create the right kind of mood for your story.
Your use of adjectives.
Some people describe too much, some people too little.
Characters
I will check your character development, how you describe them and how you write them. What should be done differently.
Description
Almost the same thing as adjectives above, but this covers more ground, not only the use of adjectives but also every other part of the description.
Dialogue
How do your characters speak. Is it forced, is it funny. I will tell you, the dialogue is a big part of a story is it not?
Of course there shall be more as well but you'll see them in my critique.
I want to point out that if you want me to review fan-fiction tell me the subject of the story.
I'll take 5 clients at a time, non more.
And this is ll free.
Things that I have reviewed:
Nolan Simons by: tennisprincess
Disenchanted by: Ducati
First kiss: By dreamer
silent Hill: Requiem- chapter 3 By: Maki-chan.
keep 'em coming
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