Young Writers Society

And I want to give them!

Link me to any kind of fiction! Or poetry, but I'm terrible at poetry! Go on... Link me!

Preferably not high fantasy, which isn't exactly my cup of tea although I will do it if I'm desperate. Apart from that, whether they're easy or difficult to critique, I'll do it all!

Link me!

Hey Stella! I'm scasha!
Can you please please please critique this story:

The Protectors of Gaia?

It's not fantasy fiction, I put it under other fiction, it's closer to mythology, but not. Hard to explain, I know, but I hope you like it! Be as harsh as you possibly can!

I'll love you forever
If you ever need me to critique something of yours, just send me the link!

Thanks!

Come on people! If you don't ask, I won't review, and then I'll get lazy!

it's fantasy, but it's good, so please with sprinkles on top

in my portfolio under Canaby Witches is five delicious chapters to read, just tell me if you like them or not!

thank-you
---Jon---

Anything from my portfolio. Just anything. Please.

Thanks.

Gahks

Night Terrors

Hey, Stella! I've been working on this, and I know how you like to read my stuff, so I was wondering if you could take a look?

-Jared

lol, Jared, lure me into it. "You know how I like your stuff. Go on."

Wiseman, I am working on a very detailed critique for you right at this very moment but... oh... I do love Jared's work!

I'll just check it out... and critique it later

Can you reveiw pictures too?

topic33071.html

Hey Stelllaaaa! =)

I need some reviews on topic33030.html
when you have time.

Thankyousokind. ^_^

~ Clo

Hey =] if you have some time I'd like some reviews on this:
topic33043.html -> it's a poem so if you're not in the mood then I have a murder thing going on here that's just as good for me:
topic32723.html
Thankies!

topic32338.html

This one which is fantasy (but not elves and magic fantasy.) about a kid digging his way to a new world. Preferably the later chapters (3 and 4) where I haven't got any feedback OR

This one: topic32325.html

Which is a humor/romance (but definitely humor first) set in the world of policy debate.

Thanks a lot for the help. I recognize I make grammar mistakes but I'm not as much worried about those as the plot/characters/dialouge etc. of the story in general. This whole deal sounds awesome. If you don't like either of these, just pick another one of my stories out of the portfolio, I'm not really picky. I'm pretty much just looking for solid constructive feedback.

Well, I am open for business. More like begging for reviews. Feed me!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34323.html

It's fantasy... no magic though....... yet. Maybe in the 7-8 chapter but not now.

If you could please critt the other chapters of this book aswel ... please

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