Silver's Critique Cricus [Closed]

Thanks for your amazing review. I have posted new story [First attempt at novel] Please tell me whether it is engaging and I need your help in pacing of the story. Thanks! The Perfect Thief (Revised) Prologue

I'll be on it as soon as I can

Hi Silver! I have posted the first chapter The Perfect Thief (Revised) Chapter 1 Thanks!

I'll get on to both of those as soon as I can!

Done. Come on people!! This circus needs an audience!!

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@ArtStyx I'll be on it as soon as I can!

Hi Silver! I have updated the story:
The Perfect Thief Chapter 3 Part 1

I'm quite confused with it at the moment, whether to continue the story or rewrite it again, completely. Waiting for your suggestions! Thanks!

Why isn't this place ninety-nine pages?

@GoldFlame Haha! Clearly because no-one wants one of Silverlock's reviews There must be something wrong with them. :/

@ArtStyx can't seem to find your chapter, can you link it to me?

Silverlock wrote:@GoldFlame Haha! Clearly because no-one wants one of Silverlock's reviews There must be something wrong with them. :/

No way! I'm desperately waiting for your review

Haha! I'll get to it as soon as I finish my other reviewing commitments

Can you review the first chapter of my story Unexpected happening?

Hey @ire123 I can't seem to find your story :/ Could you post me a link?